| 摘要 | 第1-7页 |
| Abstract | 第7-13页 |
| Introduction | 第13-20页 |
| Chapter 1 Retrospection and Reflection of Studies on English Writing Feedback | 第20-28页 |
| ·Different Approaches to Language Teaching | 第20-21页 |
| ·Research on Second Language Writing under Different Pedagogies | 第21-24页 |
| ·Study of Feedback on Second Language Writing | 第24-26页 |
| ·An Overview of Study on Feedback in Second Language Writing Abroad | 第24-25页 |
| ·A Review of Study on Feedback in College English Writing by Chinese schola | 第25-26页 |
| ·Inadequacy of Research on Feedback in Second Language Writing | 第26-28页 |
| ·The Inadequacy of Study on Feedback in Second Language Writing Abroad | 第26-27页 |
| ·The Inadequacy of Study on Feedback in College English Writing by Chinese Scholars | 第27-28页 |
| Chapter 2 Study on Feedback in College English Writing under Embodied | 第28-36页 |
| ·The Origin and Development of the Concept of Experience | 第28-31页 |
| ·The Philosophical Background of the Concept of Experience | 第29页 |
| ·The Brief Introduction of the Development of the Concept of Experience | 第29-31页 |
| ·Views from the Perspective of Philosophy in the Flesh | 第31-34页 |
| ·Embodied Mind in Philosophy in the Flesh | 第32页 |
| ·Interpretation Power of Mind Embodiment | 第32-34页 |
| ·Enlightenment on the Current Research Embodied Philosophy | 第34-36页 |
| Chapter 3 Research Methodology | 第36-52页 |
| ·The Background and Theoretical Basis of the Research | 第36-37页 |
| ·Subjects | 第37页 |
| ·Research Procedure | 第37-42页 |
| ·Grouping the Subjects | 第37-39页 |
| ·Training the Subjects | 第39-42页 |
| ·Instruments | 第42-45页 |
| ·Protest Writing, Posttest Writing and a Semi-Open Inter- view | 第42-43页 |
| ·Three Writing Tasks | 第43页 |
| ·The Questionnaire | 第43-44页 |
| ·Comparison of Students’Preferences for Feedbacks | 第44-45页 |
| ·Data Collection | 第45-48页 |
| ·TFB and PFB in Three “Writing Cycles” | 第46-47页 |
| ·Questionnaire and Pretest and Post-test Writing | 第47页 |
| ·A Semi-Open Interview with Some Subjects | 第47-48页 |
| ·Data Analysis | 第48-52页 |
| ·A Qualitative Way to Analyze the Six Articles | 第48-50页 |
| ·Analysis of Questionnaire | 第50-52页 |
| Chapter 4 Findings and Enlightenments | 第52-61页 |
| ·Total Amount of Feedbacks Received and Incorporated in Each Group | 第52-54页 |
| ·The Rate Between All Incorporated Points and Received Points in Feedbacks | 第54-55页 |
| ·All Received Points in PFB in the Three Topics | 第55-57页 |
| ·Comparison of Score Changes in Pretest and Post-test | 第57-58页 |
| ·Some Responses to the Research from the Questionnaire | 第58-61页 |
| Conclusion | 第61-64页 |
| Note | 第64-65页 |
| Bibliography | 第65-71页 |
| Acknowledgements | 第71-72页 |
| Appendix I Sample Peer Response Sheet for a Paragraph | 第72-73页 |
| Appendix II Comment Sample Based on Embodied Experience | 第73-74页 |
| Appendix III Revising Checklist | 第74-77页 |
| Appendix Ⅳ Interview 关于同伴反馈的认识的访谈提纲 | 第77-79页 |
| Appendix Ⅴ Questionnaire | 第79-82页 |
| AppendixⅥ Range-finders for CET 4&6 | 第82-84页 |
| Appendix Ⅶ (攻读学位期间发表论文) | 第84页 |
