| 独创性声明 | 第1-6页 |
| Abstract | 第6-8页 |
| 摘要 | 第8-9页 |
| Chapter 1 Introduction | 第9-13页 |
| ·A definition of peer response | 第9页 |
| ·Objectives of the study | 第9-10页 |
| ·Background and significance of the study | 第10-13页 |
| ·Cunent situation of English writing teaching in China | 第10-11页 |
| ·Current situation of writing research in China | 第11-13页 |
| Chapter 2 Literature review | 第13-23页 |
| ·Research into revision | 第13-15页 |
| ·Research as a recursive process | 第13页 |
| ·Revision strategies of skilled versus unskilled writers | 第13-14页 |
| ·Revision and response | 第14-15页 |
| ·Revision and peer response | 第15页 |
| ·Research into peer response | 第15-23页 |
| ·The positive effects of peer response | 第15-16页 |
| ·Mixed effects of ESL peer response | 第16-18页 |
| ·Research into peer response in EFL context | 第18-20页 |
| ·Studies of peer response in China | 第20-21页 |
| ·Importance of preparation for peer response | 第21-23页 |
| Chapter 3 Theoretical framework of the study | 第23-27页 |
| ·The input and output hypothesis | 第23-24页 |
| ·The interaction hypothesis | 第24-25页 |
| ·Sociocultural theory | 第25-27页 |
| Chapter 4 Research method | 第27-33页 |
| ·Research questions | 第27页 |
| ·Subjects | 第27-28页 |
| ·Materials | 第28-29页 |
| ·Procedures | 第29-32页 |
| ·Data collection | 第32-33页 |
| Chapter 5 Data analysts and findings | 第33-50页 |
| ·Questionnaire results | 第33-36页 |
| ·Drafts, comments, and revisions | 第36-44页 |
| ·A comparison between the overall comments and revision-oriented comments on 1~(st) composition between pre-training and post-training | 第37-40页 |
| ·A comparison between revision-oriented comments on 1~(st) drafts and actual revisions on 2~(nd) drafts of 1~(st) writing | 第40-42页 |
| ·A comparison between 1~(st) writing and 4~(th) writing | 第42-44页 |
| ·The overall comments and the number of revision-oriented comments on 4~(th) writing | 第42-43页 |
| ·A comparison of revision-oriented comments made on 1~(st) writing and 4~(th) writing | 第43页 |
| ·Acomparison between percentage of actual revision in 1~(st) writing and 4~(th) writing | 第43-44页 |
| ·Interviews | 第44-50页 |
| Chapter 6 Discussion | 第50-57页 |
| Chapter 7 Conclusions | 第57-60页 |
| ·Conclusions | 第57-58页 |
| ·Implications | 第58-59页 |
| ·Limitations | 第59-60页 |
| Bibliography | 第60-68页 |
| Appendix 1: Questionnaire (Week 1) | 第68-70页 |
| Appendix 2: Questionnaire (Week 16) | 第70-72页 |
| Appendix 3: The guidelines for peer response groups | 第72-73页 |
| Acknowledgements | 第73页 |