| Acknowledgments | 第1-5页 |
| Abstract | 第5-7页 |
| 内容提要 | 第7-11页 |
| Chapter One Introduction | 第11-18页 |
| ·Problems of teaching writing in the researcher's high school | 第11-15页 |
| ·Large classes and focus on examination | 第11-12页 |
| ·Lack of systematic writing instruction | 第12-13页 |
| ·Writing as product-oriented exercises rather than communication means | 第13-14页 |
| ·Ineffective teacher feedback | 第14-15页 |
| ·Orilgnal proposal of the research-peer feedback | 第15-16页 |
| ·Final proposal of the research—model feedback | 第16-17页 |
| ·The organization of the thesis | 第17-18页 |
| Chapter Two Literature Review | 第18-28页 |
| ·Pedagogical studies on peer feedback and teacher feedback | 第18-23页 |
| ·Comparative studies of peer feedback and teacher feedback | 第18-19页 |
| ·Studies on the effectiveness of peer feedback | 第19-21页 |
| ·Training for peer feedback | 第21-22页 |
| ·The influence of context and culture on peer feedback | 第22页 |
| ·Advocates of model samples in writing | 第22-23页 |
| ·Research basis for model feedback as a means for teaching of writing | 第23-28页 |
| ·Post-process in teaching of writing | 第23-25页 |
| ·Modeling and observational learning | 第25-28页 |
| Chapter Three Research Design | 第28-38页 |
| ·Research setting | 第28-29页 |
| ·Research hypotheses and research questions | 第29-30页 |
| ·Subjects and participants | 第30页 |
| ·Instruments | 第30-33页 |
| ·Two questionnaires for students | 第30-31页 |
| ·Scores of the compositions | 第31-32页 |
| ·Interviews | 第32-33页 |
| ·Procedure | 第33-38页 |
| Chapter Four Data Presentation and Results | 第38-51页 |
| ·Data collected from pre- and -post questionnaires for students | 第38-43页 |
| ·Data from scores of three drafts of the last composition | 第43-44页 |
| ·Data from the interview with the students | 第44-51页 |
| Chapter Five Discussion | 第51-57页 |
| ·Research findings | 第51-55页 |
| ·Limitation of the research | 第55页 |
| ·Questions for further exploration | 第55-57页 |
| Chapter Six Conclusion | 第57-59页 |
| Appendix 1 | 第59-61页 |
| Appendix 2 | 第61-63页 |
| Appendix 3 | 第63-65页 |
| Appendix 4 | 第65-66页 |
| Appendix 5 | 第66-69页 |
| Appendix 6 | 第69-70页 |
| References | 第70-75页 |
