| Abstract in English | 第1-5页 |
| Abstract in Chinese | 第5-8页 |
| Chapter Ⅰ Introduction | 第8-13页 |
| ·Background of the Research | 第8-11页 |
| ·Problems in Writing from Teachers | 第8-9页 |
| ·Problems in Writing from Students | 第9-11页 |
| ·Objective of the Study | 第11页 |
| ·Significance of the Thesis | 第11-12页 |
| ·Organization of the Thesis | 第12-13页 |
| Chapter Ⅱ Literature Review | 第13-24页 |
| ·Theoretical Basis | 第13-15页 |
| ·Process Writing Theory | 第13-14页 |
| ·Output Hypothesis Theory | 第14-15页 |
| ·Studies on Feedback to English Writing | 第15-24页 |
| ·Definition of Feedback | 第15-16页 |
| ·Teacher Feedback | 第16-20页 |
| ·Peer Feedback | 第20-24页 |
| Chapter Ⅲ Research Methodology | 第24-33页 |
| ·Research Questions | 第24页 |
| ·Subjects | 第24-25页 |
| ·Research Instruments | 第25-26页 |
| ·Research Procedure | 第26-33页 |
| ·Questionnaire about the Current Situation of Feedback | 第26页 |
| ·Pre-test about the Current Level of Students'Writing | 第26-27页 |
| ·Experiment about Combining Teacher Feedback and Peer Feedback | 第27-31页 |
| ·Post-test about Students'Writing Performance after Experiment | 第31-32页 |
| ·Questionnaire about Students'Attitude toward Feedback | 第32页 |
| ·Interview about Students'Attitude toward Feedback | 第32-33页 |
| Chapter Ⅳ Data Analysis and Discussion | 第33-62页 |
| ·Current Situation of Feedback in English Writing Teaching | 第33-40页 |
| ·Current Situation of Students'Writing | 第33-34页 |
| ·Awareness of Feedback | 第34-35页 |
| ·Implementation of Feedback | 第35-40页 |
| ·Comparison of Students' Writing Performance Before and After the Experiment | 第40-49页 |
| ·Comparison of Pre-tests of Control Class and Experiment Class | 第41-43页 |
| ·Comparison of Pre-test and Post-test of Control Class and Experiment Class | 第43-46页 |
| ·Comparison of Post-tests of Control Class and Experiment Class | 第46-49页 |
| ·Students' Attitudes towards the Combination of Teacher Feedback and Peer Feedback | 第49-62页 |
| ·DataAnalysis and Discussion of Questionnaire for Experiment Class | 第49-55页 |
| ·DataAnalysis and Discussion of Questionnaire for Control Class | 第55-58页 |
| ·DataAnalysis and Discussion of Interview | 第58-62页 |
| Chapter Ⅴ Conclusion | 第62-69页 |
| ·Major Findings | 第62-64页 |
| ·Implications of the Study | 第64-68页 |
| ·Limitations of the Study and Future Research Directions | 第68-69页 |
| References | 第69-73页 |
| Appendixes Ⅰ | 第73-74页 |
| Appendixes Ⅱ | 第74-75页 |
| Appendixes Ⅲ | 第75-77页 |
| Appendixes Ⅳ | 第77-79页 |
| Appendixes Ⅴ | 第79-81页 |
| Appendixes Ⅵ | 第81-82页 |
| Appendixes Ⅶ | 第82-83页 |
| Appendixes Ⅷ | 第83-84页 |
| Acknowledgements | 第84页 |
