| Acknowledgements | 第1-6页 |
| Abstract in Chinese | 第6-8页 |
| Abstract in English | 第8-10页 |
| List of Tables & Figures | 第10-11页 |
| Chapter 1 Introduction | 第11-14页 |
| ·Current Situation of English Writing Instruction in China | 第11-12页 |
| ·The Significance of the Study | 第12-13页 |
| ·The Layout of the Thesis | 第13-14页 |
| Chapter 2 Literature Review | 第14-22页 |
| ·The Definitions and the Value of Feedback | 第14-15页 |
| ·Research on Feedback Abroad | 第15-18页 |
| ·Research on Teacher Feedback | 第15-16页 |
| ·Research on Peer Feedback | 第16-18页 |
| ·Research on the Effect of Feedback on the Improvement of Accuracy | 第18页 |
| ·Research on Writing at Home | 第18-22页 |
| ·Research on English Writing Instruction | 第19-20页 |
| ·Research on Teacher Feedback | 第20页 |
| ·Research on Peer Feedback | 第20-22页 |
| Chapter 3 Theoretical Rationale | 第22-27页 |
| ·Vygotsky’s Sociolinguistic Theory | 第22-24页 |
| ·Cooperative Learning Theory | 第24-25页 |
| ·The Interactionist Hypothesis | 第25-27页 |
| Chapter 4 Research Design | 第27-32页 |
| ·Research Questions | 第27页 |
| ·Subjects | 第27-28页 |
| ·Classification of Errors and Measures of Accuracy and Fluency | 第28-29页 |
| ·Procedure | 第29-30页 |
| ·Data Collection | 第30-32页 |
| ·Questionnaires | 第30-31页 |
| ·Pre-, Mid- and Post-tests | 第31-32页 |
| Chapter 5 Results and Discussion | 第32-44页 |
| ·Results | 第32-39页 |
| ·Information from Questionnaires | 第32-34页 |
| ·Results from Test 1，Test 3 and Test 6 | 第34-39页 |
| ·Findings and Discussion | 第39-44页 |
| ·EFL Students Have Positive Attitudes towards Teacher and Peer Feedback. | 第39-40页 |
| ·Feedback Has Effects on the Accuracy of Students’Writing | 第40-41页 |
| ·Teacher plus Peer Feedback Is More Effective than Teacher Feedback in Accuracy | 第41-42页 |
| ·Teacher plus Peer Feedback Has Effects on Fluency. | 第42-44页 |
| Chapter 6 Conclusion | 第44-49页 |
| ·Summary | 第44页 |
| ·Implications | 第44-47页 |
| ·Limitations of the Study and Suggestions for Further Study | 第47-49页 |
| Bibliography | 第49-55页 |
| Appendices | 第55-59页 |
| Appendix A | 第55-57页 |
| Appendix B | 第57-58页 |
| Appendix C | 第58-59页 |
| Publications during the Postgraduate Program | 第59-60页 |
