| 内容提要 | 第1-6页 |
| Abstract | 第6-9页 |
| 1.Introduction | 第9-12页 |
| ·Foreword | 第9-10页 |
| ·Background of the Study | 第10页 |
| ·Research in the Teaching of Writing | 第10页 |
| ·Overview of the Thesis | 第10-12页 |
| 2.A survey of literature review | 第12-23页 |
| ·The introduction of writing | 第12-17页 |
| ·What's writing? | 第12-13页 |
| ·Aspects of writing skills | 第13-14页 |
| ·Testing writing | 第14-17页 |
| ·Terminology of error feedback | 第17-18页 |
| ·Direct feedback and indirect feedback | 第18-19页 |
| ·The definition of Direct feedback & Indirect feedback | 第18页 |
| ·The application of Direct feedback & Indirect feedback | 第18-19页 |
| ·Existing problems about teachers'response to error correction | 第19-23页 |
| ·Students'attitude towards teachers'direct feedback | 第19-20页 |
| ·Students'problems in facing teachers'feedback in writing | 第20-21页 |
| ·Teachers'role in students'writing | 第21-23页 |
| 3.The research design | 第23-44页 |
| ·Hypothesis | 第23页 |
| ·Subjects | 第23-24页 |
| ·Instruments | 第24-25页 |
| ·Pretest and posttest | 第24页 |
| ·The first and second drafts by students | 第24-25页 |
| ·Scoring the students'writing provided with direct feedback | 第25页 |
| ·Scoring the students'writing provided with indirect feedback | 第25页 |
| ·Questionnaire survey and the interview | 第25页 |
| ·Procedures | 第25-30页 |
| ·Pretest-Collecting the writing scores in the students'class-grouping test | 第25-26页 |
| ·Collecting the drafts in both classes | 第26-27页 |
| ·Applying the direct and indirect feedback in students'writing assignments | 第27-29页 |
| ·Direct feedback in the controlled classroom | 第27-28页 |
| ·Mark coded symbols | 第27-28页 |
| ·Giving correct answer | 第28页 |
| ·Indirect feedback in the experimental classroom | 第28-29页 |
| ·The implementation of questionnaire on students'attitude toward teacher feedback | 第29页 |
| ·Interviewing some of the students in both classes | 第29-30页 |
| ·Data analysis | 第30-40页 |
| ·Analyzing the students'writings | 第30-35页 |
| ·Comparing the changes in students'writings | 第30-34页 |
| ·Comparing the changes between the pretest and the second drafts | 第30-34页 |
| ·Comparing the changes between pretest and the posttest | 第34页 |
| ·Comparing students'perception of direct feedback and the indirect feedback | 第34-35页 |
| ·Data for case study-comparison of the students'drafts | 第35-40页 |
| ·Case study | 第35-40页 |
| ·CasestudyⅠ | 第36-58页 |
| ·CasestudyⅡ | 第0-40页 |
| ·Students'answers of direct and indirect feedback in the interview | 第40-44页 |
| 4.Conclusion | 第44-48页 |
| References | 第48-53页 |
| Appendix Ⅰ英文写作调查问卷 | 第53-55页 |
| Appendix Ⅱ访谈问题 | 第55-56页 |
| Appendix Ⅲ Sample instructions and text | 第56-58页 |
| Acknowledgements | 第58页 |
